Starbun: April 2006

Wednesday, April 26, 2006

STARBUN FAN ART? WOWEE!

Hey look at this! Starbun Fan art! Already! What the?!
I have to say it is great to be receiving such a good response from you guys.
This illustration is pretty wild, I must say! Sort of an homage to Starbun 6, I guess. Thanks, man! ( I like that one too.)
Just a few comments on it:
Gee, where to start.....
The shitty semi-manga style speaks for itself. “Needs immense improvement” is more or less what it is saying. Politely by the way.
Um, Ector ( I am assuming that is who the character on the right is) looks really crappy. What made you think hair like that would look good? It doesn't. What is up with his right hand? The cone is almost going through his knuckles. Also the shading on the neck doesn't work. This is me being nice.
A hint for drawing Starbun: Don’t make him a three legged cat. Because that is pretty much exactly what he isn’t. And you drew the star wrong.
What else....
Oh yeah. Try avoiding colouring next time. Because you can’t. And was that a conscious decision not to colour the tongues? Seems weird to me.
And “You made it so my ice cream fell”? That is just a really awkward sentence. And from what I can see, it just a little blob that fell. Ector still has plenty of ice cream, man. Doesn't seem like a big deal. Why is Starbun saying “Crescent moon symbol?” Am I missing something?
Anyway, other than that...Great stuff! It is a real hoot to receive things like this, so keep it coming!!